Do I look worthy of a goodbye?
Perhaps not.
Perhaps yes.
Perhaps there are multiple connotations to this.
Perhaps it isn't a question.
Perhaps it indeed must have an answer.
Perhaps I am worthy of reconciliation.
Perhaps there isn't any room for it.
Perhaps the void must never fill.
Perhaps there isn't a void.
Perhaps it is my head.
Perhaps it was once my heart. Perhaps I must reconcile, to
all that was once upon a time.
Perhaps there is no need to linger.
Perhaps it will always hover over my head.
Perhaps I will find it again. Beyond reasonable doubt.
Perhaps it was meant to be lost.
Perhaps it is yet another thing to find.
Perhaps in all chaste glory of an era, I still embrace the
past.
Perhaps you must realize that the very same era is what a
legacy could be made of.
All the confusion, finding acceptance and yet countering it the very next moment.
ReplyDeleteBrilliantly written, the last line encompassing every thought and somehow giving each of them a reason.
Great work :) Labyrinth..The title sums it all.
Keep writing Kanika!
A brilliant opening line, and the content that follows is great! The conflict, clear throughout. Some of the lines in there are epic. The "deadened" way in which emotions have been conveyed are commendable. I absolutely love the first line, and of course the last two. Lines like "Perhaps it was once my heart" create a strong impact on the readers. A commendable work. Very nice. Keep it up!
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